As a story map author there’s lots of little things to consider which, when summed, can make a big difference in attracting an audience to your stories. After the initial visual impression, the title and subtitle are usually the first elements of your story map that are noticed.
Effective titles and subtitles can entice otherwise hesitant users into venturing further. While definitely more art than science, here’s a few examples to consider as you craft your own story maps.
Speak in color
Do you like beer? Do you live in St. Louis? Then this title and subtitle might be all that’s needed to entice you into the story.
But if you’re neither a beer lover nor resident, what you read above likely won’t lure you further. But suppose some changes were made:
Perhaps a little over-the-top (over-the-hop?), but even if beer isn’t your thing, the new title and subtitle add a little spice and color to an otherwise black and white introduction.
Often a question can be a way to create interest in your story. Here’s a few examples that lure you into the story with questions, even if you hadn’t thought about the questions the story answers before.
David Letterman made the Top Ten famous. Guinness documents the ultimate. Everyone seems interested in the best and the worst of just about anything, so story maps titled with the top (or bottom) of of any subject seem to attract attention.
Promote your cause
Have a cause you want to bring to public attention? Then think about engaging your audience using powerful statements that push buttons and pull strings. Here’s an example from a recent story map on the plight of Africa’s wild elephants.
And here are a couple more that lure you into the story using strong words, facts, and figures:
Browse the Story Maps Gallery and see what titles entice you to view the story. You’ll know a good title and subtitle when you see them, and can use your experiences to help craft yours. Other things to consider include:
- The title should be active, descriptive, and evocative, not just a simple label.
- Don’t be too verbose, but verbose enough to entice your audience.
- The subtitle should be complementary and strengthen the title.
- Use additional details in the subtitle to lure your audience into your story.
- Including a detailed location reference is a good idea, your audience may not have any context. Is your story about Paris, France, or Paris, Kentucky?
Titles and subtitles are a simple part of every story map, yet can be a powerful way to highlight your story and attract viewers.
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